good stuff.
1:25-1:29 made the song for me.
as a drummer i think it would sound a little better if you used a few different crashes more often, it sounds like your really laying into a china alot, but that's just personal preference.
as a guitarist there is nothing i can think of to improve. good work man.
I think heartbreak is an important part of being a good artist. put your passion into your music like this and it really comes through.